How to craft your college essay: lessons from the College Board

I know…you’re kicking yourself now. Senior year is starting next week and you haven’t written your college application essay. Where did the summer months go?

That’s why I’ve been blogging about it for months. The purpose was to get you off your duffs and get you to start writing.

So here’s what I want to know:

*Have you reviewed the 5 Common Application prompts?
*Do you have a solid topic for the essay?
*Do you know how you want to begin it?
*Can you write this story in 650 words or less — here’s a newsflash, if you go over the maximum word count the software won’t let you submit.
*Have you interviewed your mother, father and siblings to see if they have anything to offer for your essay?
*What have you actually written so far? Nothing?

Ok, then here’s an assignment:
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An example of a lovely essay

I just came across this essay (“A Heartbroken Temp at Brides.com”) and thought I’d share it with you.

Though the topic is not one that would likely be used for a college application, it is an example of a story that has a strong beginning and thoughtful ending with a tone that inspires sympathy and empathy.

When writing your college essay, try to stir emotion in your reader. The story will be more compelling and memorable.

Writing an essay with emotion requires self-exploration. Brainstorm topics by bouncing ideas off your parents, siblings, friends and extended family. Try to recall an incident that taught you something or made you come to terms with a reality.

Don’t be afraid to use humor. Don’t avoid writing about heartbreak. Don’t be shy about writing about victory, leadership, and success. As long as you write well and stay genuine, your essay will touch a chord in your reader.

College essays are being edited this week

Six rising seniors are working on their college essays this week after taking my workshop on Aug. 3 entitled “Brainstorm your college essay.”

Their story topics are all compelling and genuine — the essence of a good essay. The group did a writing exercise by describing their bedrooms in detail to get ideas flowing and we delved into their lives a bit to uncover their interests and passions.

Some are writing about the contrast in cultures they’ve experienced growing up in ethnic households. Others are writing about coping with loss or disappointment. Each is illustrating a period of growth and maturation as they found resolution. They are showing their resiliency and willingness to persevere.

Put yourself in the shoes of a college admissions officer. What would you look for in a freshman candidate? College requires endurance, time management and social skills, and flexibility. An admissions officer wants to admit students who will succeed on campus.

The students and I are in the draft editing phase. After my workshops I read the students’ first drafts and make comments and suggestions.

If you need help, just ask by emailing me at WinningCollegeEssay@gmail.com.

I’m coming to the Westborough Library!

The College Essay Confidante is coming to the Westborough Library, 55 W. Main St., Aug. 17 to 19!!!

I’ll be offering a three-part college essay writing class for Westborough, Mass. rising seniors.

Session one: 2 to 3:30 p.m.

Session two: 4:30 to 6 p.m.

If you know of anyone who needs the help, please spread the word.

To register click here.

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Another brainstorming workshop on tap; SOLD OUT!

I’ll be holding another college essay brainstorming workshop tomorrow and I can’t wait to meet my students.

With only six available seats, the workshop is full.

The students are all rising seniors on their way to bright futures. My role is to help them get over one hurdle — the college essay.

The essay gives them the opportunity to define themselves and to highlight what makes them a unique asset to the college of their choice. It takes thoughtfulness and a few written drafts to get to your kernel of truth. Understanding yourself and your value is a powerful tool for a successful life. If you nail that at age 17 or 18, you’ve got a head start.

This is why I’m always so excited to lead the workshops. I love seeing that self-realization surface in young people and I enjoy helping them capture it in words.

If you’re struggling to find a topic for your college application essay, check back here for more writing insights from the College Essay Confidante.

If you’d like to participate in one of my three-hour workshops, just let me know.

New brainstorming session, Aug. 3

The College Essay Confidanté will be offering a new workshop on “Brainstorming your essay” on Wednesday, Aug. 3 from 4 to 7 p.m.

This workshop is for rising seniors only.

Cost is $150 for 3 hours, plus professional review of your first full draft.

Limited to 6 students.

Students will leave with an essay topic and a written paragraph.

Register here.

Contact Joyce Pellino Crane at WinningCollegeEssay@gmail.com for more information.

Easing into the story.

I stumbled across this blog today.

The writer, Debbie Nel, lists essay topics for college students. Not all are relevant to the composition of the college application essay, but there are some interesting ideas.

If you’re a rising senior and are struggling with what to write for your essay, sit down with pen and paper and list the things you did today. Think of conversations you had. What you saw. What you ate. What you smelled. What did you think about? Where did you go? What did you plan? Did you brush your teeth? Did you take a shower, comb out your hair, make your bed? Did you run in the woods, jump off a bridge into the river, bake bread, read a book, play your guitar, stare at your walls, build a bookcase?

If you break down your life into tiny pieces, and think hard about the things you do, ideas will come to you. Your mind is like a network laced with tiny triggers. When you walk by a flowering bush and smell the scent it may remind you of your grandmother’s garden. When the anniversary of the day you met your best friend rolls around, you may find yourself daydreaming of that period of your life. When you stop panicking and relax into yourself, memories will turn into stories that will turn into essays that will turn into a powerful personal statement.

Believe in the process

I came across this article in the “Atlantic,” entitled “On Writing a Great Essay, Think and Care Deeply,” and wanted to share it with you. When writing an essay, believe in yourself and in your abilities to reach a higher level of thinking.

So often when I sit down to write a commentary for my newspaper, I feel the anxiety of uncertainty. What should I write? What do I want to say? Will it make logical sense? Can I revise it quickly enough to meet my deadline? Will I embarrass myself by writing something that’s not good enough?

Your college application essay will be good enough. Trust in that. But to get there, give yourself the time to think deeply and to write with no distractions. You may not know where you’re going with it, but if you write something, it will spur a thought process that will lead you somewhere.

You have to have faith.

Last week I assigned myself a commentary which was to run in the June 30 edition of my newspaper. But the night before deadline, I still had no idea what to say. Then I looked at my computer screen and saw a photo of myself with my late grandmother, a proud naturalized U.S. citizen. By the time I got to the end of the piece, I realized I wanted to acknowledge how she had paved the way for me to have a life in America. I named the piece, “My American life is courtesy of an immigrant,” and called attention to the approaching July 4th holiday. Here is the essay as it appeared in the paper.

You will have the same type of epiphany if you give yourself the opportunity to think deeply and write.

A successful brainstorming workshop

Six rising seniors attended today’s workshop in Westford, Mass., and what a rewarding experience it was.

The students left having written their opening paragraphs for their college application essays with an assignment to write the rest by Sunday, July 3.

It’s a tall order since all are going away for the holiday. But some said they’d find a short period to break away and write the story. All have the option of sending me their first draft for feedback and further direction.

Grammar, spelling, organization — none of that matters at this point. The goal is to have a beginning, middle and end. Add some tension, a transformational paragraph and a kicker (strong ending). Show how you resolved a problem or persevered when the odds were against you. Make yourself stand out in an admissions officer’s memory.

I honestly love learning about the students as the workshop progresses and they reveal more of themselves. As the layers of self-protection peel away, we come closer to finding a solid essay topic that illustrates something meaningful about them. Their genuineness is so inspiring and uplifting. I see their bright futures ahead.

The workshop is full!

My workshop on “Brainstorming your college essay” for June 29 in Westford, Mass., is full.

Six rising seniors have registered for the three-hour tutorial that will help them find a topic and begin writing.

I’ll accept names for a wait list.

I’m extremely impressed with these students for getting the ball rolling before school starts in August because that’s when things get really busy.

If you’re interested in a brainstorming workshop or a private tutoring session, just email me at winningcollegeessay@gmail.com and we’ll arrange a date to meet.

For those living out of state, we can arrange a meeting over the internet via Skype.

Just email!